It's Okay to Break The Rules
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Rob Parnell
Your Success is My Concern
It's Okay to Break the Rules (Sometimes)
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Recently I've changed the way I write fiction.
You know
me. For years I've been saying the best way to get past novel writing blocks is
to write your first draft quickly. Get the words and the story down first and
worry about the editing later.
This process certainly works if you're
having doubts about your ability to actually get a whole book written. The
principle of letting go of your inner critic is valuable - especially if you're
prone to blocks.
My last novel was around 90000 words, which I wrote very
quickly.
After the initial draft I sat down and then plotted the whole
thing - a mistake to be sure but my feeling is that you have to do whatever
works for whatever piece you're working on. Different MSS often need a different
approach so that you don't go stale sticking to own self imposed
routines.
That's fine. Embrace change.
Sometimes an idea is so
strong you just want to get started - as I did with my last novel. I loved the
premise so much I managed to pump out the entire manuscript without formally
plotting it.
Then, problem was, after the first draft - and the rethink
of the plot, I had to rewrite the entire thing again!
Mainly to sort out
issues to do with timing - it was a minute by minute thriller after all. But
also I changed the order of some of the deaths - and slightly altered the
perspective of the lead character.
So far so good.
But then it
came to the editing. I did one run through. Just tightening up the prose until I
was fairly happy with it - I thought!
Then I gave the manuscript to one
of my assistants to read. She's nearer the age of the lead character and I
wanted her feedback. She had some criticisms. Fair enough.
One more
edit.
Then I thought I was ready to send it out.
I did and got a
couple of rejections. Okay. Can't win them all.
Then I thought, what if I
wanted to publish the book myself?
Good in theory - so I began the
process.
I decided I'd need a stronger opening so wrote a new
prologue.
Trouble was, I was so impressed with the writing in the new
prologue, I realized I'd have to make the rest of the book as good!
So
another edit ensued. This one took ages. I basically had to re-look at every
line, every word, every paragraph and chapter - to make the manuscript as strong
as it should be.
Maybe in the two years that it had taken to get the book
finished, I had grown and changed. I started to feel like I was editing someone
else's book. That I was no longer the person that had written the first
draft.
Good, really. But it meant I had to do a lot more work at the end
of the novel writing process that I would ever have envisaged at the
beginning.
The consequence of all this unexpected work was that I decided
I wasn't going to do this for the next one.
So, as I said at the
beginning, I changed the way I write fiction.
Just slightly. I mean I'm
still the same story teller. I can still see my voice in the writing. But now
I've changed just one aspect.
Speed.
Yes, I've slowed
down.
Instead of writing my most recent book as fast and furiously as
possible, I decided that a more considered pace was appropriate - at least for
this story.
Basically I just don't want to spend so long editing this one
- so I'm taking my time over which words I use to express myself during the
first draft.
Why? Because I'm deliberately looking for all the things I
usually want to edit out later.
Things like the overuse of adverbs, 'ing'
words, the word 'it' and anything woolly sounding like 'just', 'felt', 'decided'
and 'thought'.
The interesting thing is that if you try and avoid the
woolly stuff the first time around, it seems to change your writing - almost
fundamentally.
Passages of description suddenly become much more specific
- and effective. And when you're forced to write without adverbs, you realize
you have to change the way you say things in order to get the 'ly' word across
without actually using it!
But the other thing that's really helped this
new book is that I plotted the whole thing from beginning to end first - before
I did any writing.
Just like all those bestseller writers I'm always
telling you about, I wrote a very detailed outline of the story before I
began.
Now that doesn't mean the novel slavishly follows the template.
No, as you'd expect, new scenarios, even new characters seem to appear as I'm
writing. But that's okay.
At least now I know that as I'm writing, the
quality is fairly good. Not because it's literary or clever - far from
it.
The purpose of clarity in writing, I believe, is to serve the
reader.
And whatever technique you or I choose to employ is to that
end.
I feel this time - in this latest novel - I have at last found the
right balance between my own technique and its end purpose. That is, to
entertain (and to sell a squillion copies of course!)
Plus, I'm enjoying
the process.
Time will tell.
Fingers crossed.
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