Show Don't Tell - What it Means
Rob Parnell This is probably the least understood phrase for new writers – probably because it seems to go against logic. Writers tell stories right? No. Good writers show stories. To me there’s really only one thing you need to remember when it comes to showing your stories, and that is a quote from Graham Masterton. He said: “Don’t tell your story. Be there.” Basically, it doesn’t matter how good your writing is. If you’re telling the story you are distancing your reader from it. Here’s an example of telling: Jason knew he had to go to the Dentist. His teeth hurt so much that he told his mother about it. She suggested he call Dr Evans, a man who had looked after the family’s teeth for years. He made the call and arranged to be at Dr Evans surgery at three o clock. That would give him plenty of time to do a few errands – and be back in time for tea. This is completely passive because the information is being related from the omniscient, non-personal viewpoint. In order to ‘sh...